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Creative writing. Theory and practice. Параграф 2. Strategies of writing paragraphs - номер 7, страница 228.

Условие.

7. Another girl, Ann, decided to write a paragraph about books. Here is her revised paragraph. Its main idea is — People read less in the new Millennium than before. Notice how Ann has changed her paragraph. Can you explain why each change has been made?

People don't read as much as they used to in the new Millennium. Why is it so?

For example, my

I like reading books very much. My brother reads only the books

First of all,

he is asked to read at school. It is easier to get the information you need

Then,

from the Internet. It is more interesting to watch a film (a screen version And we shouldn't forget that of the book) than to read this book.

Books are very expensive nowadays.

Many children prefer computers to books.

Решение.

Решение 2.

Можете ли вы объяснить, почему было внесено каждое изменение?

Ответ:

a) The sentence "I like reading books very much" was deleted because it contradicts the main idea of the paragraph – that people read less now. / Предложение "Я очень люблю читать книги" было удалено, так как оно противоречит основной идее абзаца – что люди сейчас читают меньше.

b) The linking words and phrases ("For example", "First of all", "Then", "And we shouldn't forget that") were added to structure the arguments logically and make the text more coherent and easier to follow. / Были добавлены слова и фразы-связки ("Например", "Во-первых", "Затем", "И не стоит забывать, что"), чтобы логически структурировать аргументы и сделать текст более связным и легким для восприятия.

c) The concluding sentence "Many children prefer computers to books" was added to summarize the reasons given and reinforce the main idea of the paragraph. / Было добавлено заключительное предложение "Многие дети предпочитают компьютеры книгам", чтобы обобщить приведенные причины и усилить основную мысль абзаца.