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Module 5. Who are you?. 5e. Writing Skills - номер 6, страница 94.

Условие.

6 Read the rubric and find the key words, then read the student's answer and the teacher's comments. Rewrite the report according to the teacher's instructions.

The warden of your local park wants to make the

park more attractive and popular. Write a report

making some suggestions on how the appearance

of the park and its facilities can be improved.

Inappropriate intro. Rewrite.

Information incomplete.

To: Mike Stephens, Shipton Park Warden

Subject: Suggestions for improving Shipton Park

Introduction

I'd really like to tell you about the things I've thought of to make the park better for people.

Appearance

The park is in need of more plants, flowers and trees. Therefore, I suggest that more gardeners be employed by the council. My dad has planted lots of flowers in our garden and it looks lovely. Also, there is a lot of litter in the park.

So? What should be done about it?

Playground

I feel that you could improve the facilities in the park. There is no children's playground, so you should build one. You could open a cafeteria and construct a small football pitch.

To sum up, I believe that these recommendations would improve the park immensely and encourage more people to use it.

Irrelevant, inappropriate information.

Replace e.g. In this way...

Missing or inappropriate headings.

Use the passive in this section and add linking words/ phrases.

Решение 1.

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Решение 3.